*sat still after finishing* That was absolutely miserable & quiet & tender & wonderful, heh. I think we've all had that moment of Jared's as he was sat on the floor listening for the truck--anxious & miserable & relieved yet heartbroken when he heard the truck start up & drive away... *deflates*
Nicely done, I'll be saving for a re-read later, thank you :)
(PS Loved that Jensen had to follow through on all the things that he'd thought about, & that Jared realized it was important. And Jensen's heels leaving the ground--what an awesome thing to include, y'know? A little detail that makes it all more real)
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Date: 2011-07-14 04:14 am (UTC)Nicely done, I'll be saving for a re-read later, thank you :)
(PS Loved that Jensen had to follow through on all the things that he'd thought about, & that Jared realized it was important. And Jensen's heels leaving the ground--what an awesome thing to include, y'know? A little detail that makes it all more real)