I just gotta pause and tell you that this particular paragraph?
“You’re okay,” Jared repeated “you’re gonna be fine.” Jared held him tighter drew him into the house. “Welcome home.”
It conveyed so much while saying so little. Erm, you know what I mean. So far, the story has an air of hopelessness and despair. The moment Jared said that, I felt a sense of renewed hope. I love this story already and I haven't even finished the second chapter! ❤
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Date: 2010-08-06 03:56 pm (UTC)“You’re okay,” Jared repeated “you’re gonna be fine.” Jared held him tighter drew him into the house. “Welcome home.”
It conveyed so much while saying so little. Erm, you know what I mean. So far, the story has an air of hopelessness and despair. The moment Jared said that, I felt a sense of renewed hope. I love this story already and I haven't even finished the second chapter! ❤