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Part 4


Epilogue:

This was what a perfect day for writing looked like. It was somewhat cloudy and cool, the morning sun peeking through to reflect off of the small creek that ran lazy and twisting behind Jensen’s new place. One of those perfect spring days, muggy, a light wind pushing the clouds across the sky and carrying the promise of a warmer afternoon. Jensen wondered if the water would be warm enough for a swim later in the day.

Wisteria hung on a trellis along one wall of the screened porch, making the light take on a kind of surreal green tinge. Jared had been right: the stuff did smell exactly like honey and burnt cork.

Jared had been right about a lot of things.

The porch’s wide planked floor felt rough beneath Jensen’s bare feet. It gave a rusty groan when he settled down into his chair, dragging it up to a small desk he’d slapped together out of cinderblocks and scrap lumber. A cardboard box full of blank paper sat next to his chair, his blown glass paperweight keeping them in place. Jensen lifted it, holding it up to catch the sun. It had a small chip in it, a short crack on a path to the center, and the light caught and refracted in the imperfection. Probably a result of the move. He’d been in a rush when he’d packed, had thrown out most of what he owned and given a lot of the rest away.

The shrill ring of Tennessee’s old telephone sounded through the open window. It rang three and a half times. Jensen ignored it, downed the rest of his cup of coffee, now lukewarm. The wind changed direction, and Jensen could hear the distant sound of his closest neighbor’s music, a half a mile away down a narrow paved road. One good thing about living in the middle of nowhere was that there weren’t a lot of distractions.

An open box sat at his ankle, a couple dozen first editions of his new book were stacked neatly inside, their glossy covers starting to curl in the humid air. There were three more cases like this one, all waiting to be signed and sent out to bookstores all over the country. He pulled one out and opened it, the spine creaking and the comforting bookstore smell of paper and glue hanging in the air. Jensen thumbed through the pages. They contained seven short stories and one novella. Early reviews had come back favorable, but that didn't matter a lot to Jensen. What mattered was that these three hundred some odd pages had bought him the time to work on something that he needed to write. He paused at the dedication, the thick paper catching on his thumbnail. He skimmed the words.

for jared, because there is honor amongst thieves

The trilling noise of the spring on the screen door sounded, followed by the slap of wood on the doorframe. Jensen loved that sound. It reminded him of summertime growing up in Texas, lazy heat and his grandmother’s back porch. Sneaking sips of sweet mint juleps while his grandmother and her sister pretended not to notice.

Jensen shivered some when Jared looped his arms around him from behind. His skin was warm from the shower, a little damp still. It took a long time to dry off when the air was so humid like this. Jensen leaned into the feeling of Jared’s chest along the bare skin of his back. He reached up, touched Jared’s hand, traced along the bumps of his knuckles, the bones of his fingers. He tilted his head to make more room when Jared kissed the crook of his neck.

“HarperCollins on the phone. That PR guy again,” Jared spoke into his skin. “He wants you to fly to Tulane for that book reading Misha won’t shut up about.”

Jensen hummed his reply. They both knew he had no intention of going anywhere. Not for the time being, anyway. He was working, had been writing consistently for the last few months, and was superstitious about it. Now wasn’t the time to break the pattern.

He flicked the switch on his typewriter, the metal case offering a comforting sort of vibration under his palm. He fed a blank sheet of paper into the roller, centered it and typed a number one.

“Are you ready?” Jared asked.

“I think so,” Jensen replied. He paused, chewing thoughtfully on his lower lip. “You know, someone once told me that there were only two kinds of stories in the world. One of them starts out, ‘a stranger comes to town’.”

Jensen felt Jared’s smile on his skin. “So how does the other one go?”

“A man goes on a journey,” Jensen told him.

Jared kissed the back of his neck, giving his shoulders a final squeeze. “Okay. Then go.” He crossed the porch, had his hand on the door handle and turned back again. “And Jensen?”

“Yeah?”

“Make sure you take the long way home.”






Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2011-07-03 10:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ms-soma.livejournal.com
A really engaging fic! Great characters - loved how fleshed out they all were. The story flowed really well and I loved how Jared wormed his way into Jensen's heart!

Date: 2011-07-04 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Goodness, thank you so much for the feedback. Jensen tried to fight it, but I don't think the poor guy ever actually had a chance. It's lovely to know that you liked this.

Date: 2011-07-03 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] withdiamonds.livejournal.com
I really, really liked this. You did a wonderful job of conveying the suffocating paralysis of writer's block. That need to find anything else to do instead of writing. And the three of them were wonderful characters. Just a lovely story all around.

Date: 2011-07-05 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Thank you. The working title to this story was 'Breaking Blocks,' which is exactly what I was trying to do when I set out to write this one, so it's wonderful to know that Jensen's frame of mind came through loud and clear here. Again, thanks so much for the note.

Date: 2011-07-03 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xsilverdreamsx.livejournal.com
<333
Fell in love with this, and downloaded the pdf to keep.

(also, your Misha is awesome.)

Date: 2011-07-05 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Thank you, and enjoy the pdf! Misha is such a fun person to write, at times ridiculous and at others serious--but faithful throughout. Again, many thanks!

Date: 2011-07-03 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jolietjones.livejournal.com
This is a really good read and I enjoyed it very much. It's interesting for me too as I'm not a writer so it's a good insight into the whole deal. Great stuff.

Date: 2011-07-05 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
It's wonderful to know that this is relatable, even for folks who don't write. I tried very hard to not make it all about the writing. Thanks, so very glad that you liked this.

Date: 2011-07-03 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miepje-neko.livejournal.com
This was such a great read! Thanks for sharing :)

Date: 2011-07-05 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Very kind of you to say! Thanks so much.

Date: 2011-07-04 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cleflink.livejournal.com
Nice to know that I'm not the only one who can find four million things to do instead of writing. ^_^ Keep with it, Jensen!

Like the almost gritty sense of realism here - the way it's all a struggle but so worth it in the end.

Date: 2011-07-07 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Yes, it's so easy to get distracted, isn't it? I'm so glad that you liked the style of this, thank so much!

Date: 2011-07-04 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] premiumwater.livejournal.com
really enjoyed this story! i felt a bit guilty reading it though...cause i'm writing a book...but i've taken an extended pause to explore new possibilities (aka: procrastinating lol). So glad j2 got things worked out so they can live happily ever after :)

Date: 2011-07-07 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Best of luck with your book. Exploring new possibilities, indeed! That's exactly what we'll call it. Thank you, very glad you liked this.

Date: 2011-07-04 09:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vickevire.livejournal.com
This was a nice read :)

Date: 2011-07-07 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!

Date: 2011-07-04 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adam-brittboy.livejournal.com
Loved this!

I like to think I'm cold and heartless, but I can't handle sad endings anymore :)

Phew for the epilogue!

Everything about this was great. Misha was excellent. Jared so brilliantly written. Jensen, just perfect as 'author' Jensen.

Well done you!

Date: 2011-07-07 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
I know how it goes...my endings are either happy or completely ambiguous, so you're always safe here. You have my beta to thank for the epilogue--I was so close to cutting that whole bit out of the final edit. She threatened me bodily.

Thanks for the kind compliment on characterization as well.

Date: 2011-07-05 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whisp.livejournal.com
That was a great read. Thanks! Loved Misha in this. Actually I loved all three of the boys, but Misha earns an extra pat on the head for being ... well Misha. Thanks for posting!

Date: 2011-07-07 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Misha is an absolute joy to write. So much fun, complex and smart and above all faithful. Thanks so much for the kind comment!

Date: 2011-07-05 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kskitten.livejournal.com
That was a great story, thanks so much for sharing. They were really cute and so hot together.

Date: 2011-07-07 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Very kind of you to say. Happy you liked it, and many thanks!

Date: 2011-07-05 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cowboyangel.livejournal.com
Had to wait til this morning to read and I'm so glad I did because I got to take my time and really enjoy it. I LOVE the way you write, your descriptions are gorgeous. And then of course, there's the boys. I love the way that Jared helped Jensen break past his comfort zone and that got him writng again.

Date: 2011-07-07 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Well, I hope that it was worth the wait, m'dear. You are too kind! Oh the things these boys make us do...the hours spent tearing our hair out to find the right word for this or that. Thanks so much. It's so wonderful to know that you liked this.

Date: 2011-07-06 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akintay.livejournal.com
I'm absolutely in love with this story! I have a soft spot for fics where one of the boys is a writer and this one was absolutely beautiful and really well written. I especially loved the way you wrote Jared – how he was a little starstruck at first and then fit right into Jensen's life as if he belonged there and tried to draw Jensen out of his shell. He was so obviously a good influence on Jensen! And the relationship and instant connection was awesome – it was fun an sweet and a really charming getting-together-story. &hearts

Date: 2011-07-11 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Wow. Your feedback has me hugely smiling. Thank you so much for that. Writing about writers was very self-indulgent of me, a way to get all of those insecurities out of my head and onto the page. It's great to know that you liked Jared's characterization. He was a bit relentless, wasn't he? Jensen never really had a chance at all.

Someone commented below that you recced this story. I had no idea! Thank you so much for that, and hello, new friend!! How are you?

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From: [identity profile] akintay.livejournal.com - Date: 2011-07-13 09:34 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2011-07-06 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
So this story came right on time--I've been thinking hard about writing, and the people who write, and why they write. It was fascinating, watching Jensen go through this slump of his that maybe wasn't so much a slump but just waiting for a reason to write. It was cool that Jared seemed to get it, and unasked, provided Jensen with a reason.

The line about the reader finding their own message in the story really struck a note with me. It's very true--I don't like to be told what message I was supposed to have taken from a story, I take my own, but I'm aware that maybe it wasn't what the writer meant. That's what writers and artists have to deal with. Once the work is out there for people to see, it belongs to everyone. Jared seemed to understand what Jensen was saying even better than Jensen did himself and I liked that because it seemed so possible.

I'll read this story again, I know. Thank you for helping me think more about writers. Thanks for sharing this!

Date: 2011-07-11 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Such generous feedback! This story was sort of the product of me asking some of the same questions. I was in a slump myself until someone told me to sit down and just write exactly what I saw, which was a blank screen and a blinking cursor (and admittedly a very messy lab that looks a lot like Jensen's office).

Yes!!! That's it! Jared did understand Jensen better than he understood himself, and thank you so much for seeing that and pointing it out. Jensen was too close to all of it, his writer's block and his car and all of his little totems and good luck charms.

Thanks so very much-to know that you'd read this again is such a compliment.

Date: 2011-07-06 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celefinwe.livejournal.com
Love it, love *you* for writing it. Ah, to heck with it. Marry me! There's so many great lines in this story that I wanted to point each one out to you, but you probably already know them by heart. Sorta also inspired me to get off my lazy behind and start writing again. This one's a keeper!

Date: 2011-07-12 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Hahahaha!!! I'm rather taken over here, but what's a little bit of polyamory between friends? That something I made might inspire you to write something yourself is quite a compliment! Thanks so much.

Date: 2011-07-07 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pluckythedragon.livejournal.com
This was magnificent. You win.

Date: 2011-07-12 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!

Date: 2011-07-07 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hugemind.livejournal.com
This was really awesome! The story progressed with a very natural pace and the dialogue was perfect. Thank you so much for sharing this!

Date: 2011-07-12 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Great to hear that the pacing and dialogue worked well. Jensen's sarcasm here was so much fun to write. Thanks very much for reading.

Date: 2011-07-07 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audreytiphaine.livejournal.com
this was just an amazing, all-around beautifully put-together story. it hooked me instantly, and kept me all the way through. excellent characterization, and really wonderful momentum.

Date: 2011-07-17 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
It's great to know that you thought the pacing worked well. I often feared that I was writing a story for writers about writers, and it could easily get bogged down because of that. So yes, thank so much, I'm happy you liked it!

Date: 2011-07-08 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sagetan.livejournal.com
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it's so engaging and full of warmth and fun! I loved the relationship between them and how you could see how much they just plain liked each other.

I had my heart in my throat at the airport scene, just argh. I got pretty invested in their happiness by the end there! Lovely read, thank you.

I kinda really adored Misha, too. Misha <3333

Date: 2011-07-17 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Aw, shucks, thanks so much! Yes, the airport scene, you have my beta to thank for the resolution of the epilogue. I was this close to scrapping the thing, but she forbade it.

And Misha. Dear Misha. So much fun to write. Again, many thanks!

Date: 2011-07-08 03:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] morganoconner.livejournal.com
What a fantastic read!! I loved all of this this so much, and I'll admit that I really loved Misha! I'm so glad you made him such a big part of the story. :D

Thank you for sharing! ♥

Date: 2011-07-17 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Well, Misha was sort of the devil and the angel on Jensen's shoulder, all rolled into one, and a very fun character to write. So glad that you liked this. Very many thanks!

Date: 2011-07-08 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elless18.livejournal.com
That was just fantastic! I love how you described Jensen's writing process and how Jared's differed from that, and Misha was the best. This made me want to sit down and write. Too bad I'm suffering from writer's block right now. :p

Date: 2011-07-17 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Sorry to hear about your writer's block! Honestly, this story was a product of trying to get over a block myself, and the working title was 'Breaking Blocks.' I had a friend tell me to sit down and start describing what I saw, and the first few lines of this story reflect that very thing. It worked for me, and maybe it'll work for you. Thanks so much!

Date: 2011-07-09 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] confuzed.livejournal.com
This was a fun read! I am also glad Jared came back :) And that Jensen was able to start writing again.

Date: 2011-07-17 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. So glad you liked this.

A woman of good taste

Date: 2011-07-09 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memnoch.livejournal.com

I'm here because my friend akintay recommended your fic. And she is right: your story is great.
I especially like the part in which Jared listens to Jensens rant about "betrayal" and blames it on Jensens vivid imagination. So sweet ;-) The best is the end. I love happy endings and your story gives me that.
Thank you for writing it.

Re: A woman of good taste

Date: 2011-07-17 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
It is so very kind of her to recommend this, which so many wonderful stories coming out this summer. Yes, I had to throw a little bit of angst into the pot, didn't I? Thanks so much for the feedback on this, it's lovely to know that you liked it.

Date: 2011-07-12 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tartysuz.livejournal.com
This is a lovely and addictive read! You have a great ear for dialogue and rhythm for humour (if that makes any sense!).

I was wondering if you were a fan of the book/movie The Wonder Boys, then I saw your note about Grady Tripp. The scene where they steal the National Book Award reminded me of the scene where Tripp and James Leer steal the baseball in Wonder Boys -- both are hilarious scenes!

BTW, I thought the story worked better by slashing the professor and the young writer, and you matched the Jensen=Tripp and Jared=James personalities really well. :)

Date: 2011-07-17 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Wow. Thanks so much for the note on the humor. It's tough, you know? And I'm never sure whether my sense of humor translates well to the page.

Yes, I'm a big fan of The Wonder Boys, and the movie is a great adaptation. I was most of the way through writing this when I realized the book's influence on the story. It must have been in the back of my head the whole time. Such a great character in Grady Tripp--the man who cannot stop writing.

Thanks very much!

Date: 2011-07-13 09:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] princesslanie.livejournal.com
fun story. thanks for sharing.

Date: 2011-07-17 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riyku.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this. Thanks so much.
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